Funky Moves
Not much of a plot here but that didn't matter. It was a fun short and it looked like you had a good time making it.
The camera angles were great, especially the looking out the monitor POV. The choice of music was perfect aswell, and fitted in with the edits well....Daft punk tracks have a certain effect on the part of your brain that wants to dance. Keep going with the films, I think you will be on to a winner eventually. =oD